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Friday, August 28, 2020
Childrens Book
In Literacy last week we had to write a children's book, this is mine but it's not fully illustrated.
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Hey Kobe, I really like the book, especially the part when Rufus stands up for his new friends. I would really like to see the rest of the illustrations.
ReplyDeletehey kobe I really like your book it looks like you put alot of effort into it, But next time mabye try add some more animations especially when the big dogs come in, but otherwise it was really good.
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